bismathelastremains

So I posted two chapters in a row 
          	Please do check it out 
          	These chapters might be off the story 
          	But it will lighten up the mood 
          	Ta d off offcourse these chapters are so long ♥️

Author_miracle_

I read your novel overall. My suggestion is to put some spaces in when you're writing dialogue or making a scene where your characters are doing or working on something. The chapter which has no spaces are maybe chapter -8, 9 and 10 but overall I liked the story 
          
          Ahh you have an Instagram account then please follow me on that 
          
          @miraclewrites_delusions___ 
          
          ( abyss.miracle) is the second name with 4 followers right now! 

Author_miracle_

@bismathelastremains umm how many followers and following there are so many members of that name
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bismathelastremains

@Author_miracle_ i will work on it  i will read your story 
            too 
            @florence._.art 
            Here is my Instagram 
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allisnotton

Hey! Sorry for posting on your wall; feel free to remove this if it’s unwelcome.
          
          I'm a new writer hoping to get more visibility for my story and some constructive feedback on my writing.
          
          I’d really appreciate it if you checked it out, left a vote or comment if you enjoyed it, and maybe even shared it with other readers. Thanks so much! :)
          
          It's a contemporary college-y romance, more tropes are in the description!
          
          even if you're a tad bit interested (I mean, i'd be..)➤ https://www.wattpad.com/story/275047880-the-distance-between-us

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