asphericity
Heyy I appreciate all the comments you left on my book it was really refreshing to see someone who had very different opinions on it than others I’ve read in the past. It was very insightful to see my book in a new light and while I understand your justified anger towards the protagonist Riley, I just thought it was really funny and also.. surprising? To see that you made a whole new list for my book because it made you so mad. Never got that one before but there’s a first time for everything. I’m sorry if it made you rage, that wasn’t my intention with my story and I was trying to build an extreme slow burn but I can see why the characters made you mad. At times they upset me too. Honestly I never meant for Cold and Charisma to be taken so seriously and only wrote it as a hobby to past time so I never put a lot of thought into the characters, and yeah I can see why Riley would make you mad. I hope that maybe in the future you decide to finish the story (if you haven’t) and tried to see it in the light of which I tried to portray it as: a story about two polar opposite boys who put their differences aside to love each other. And if not, then thank you for reading anyway and I appreciate your feedback :)
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@asphericity Also this book DOES NOT belong in my "eww" list because it's no where near the disgusting ones that exist in it and I have no fucking idea why I put it there
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@asphericity omg I am so sorry if I made you feel bad. I finished it and I just couldn't get myself to like Riley (I tried I swear) it felt like he was forgiven easily(?). BUT that doesn't mean that I hated the whole book because I love the writing and I was actually planning to read other books of yours. Please please don't get discouraged by my comments, in fact, if any of them upset you lmk I will delete them. Also this is so embarrassing to admit but the RL was made in a fit of rage. Again, I am so sorry :(
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