bittersqxtch
MY BEANS MY BEANSSSS I FINISHED EDITING EEEEEYAAAAA
GET READY FOR REUPLOAD OF CHAPTER 2 OF QUERENCIA!! ۹(ÒہÓ)۶
jisooforpresident
@bittersqxtch girl i will wait my entire life for this book take your time <33
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bittersqxtch
@jisooforpresident AAAAH I'm so happy you're enjoying it!! <3 it took me so long to word the conversation between them because I wanted to do the "show don't tell" method, so I ended up using a bunch of metaphors for the pain these women were put through. I wanted to get across that Eleanora was never a typical wicked stepmother, but more of a woman trapped by ideals she didn't agree with but couldn't go against. and because she's under watch (with some of the Rivera guys lingering nearby), her advice can only be worded in a way that wouldn't be misinterpreted if it got relayed back to the Don. hopefully it worked haha ;^; I'll definitely work on Querencia more over the weekend when I have time, hopefully I can get another chapter edited soon!! I'm so excited to keep writing it now that I have a clearer vision for the plot ^^
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jisooforpresident
Loved her and eleanoras conversation im in love with this book in general
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