HIII! I just wanted to give a heads up. Sometimes reading long paragraphs can make lazy readers and they will skip a few sentences. I learnt this myself.
So instead type in short paragraphs for example:
______ was only ever known to be ____ husband and for his unique beauty. With his gorgeously delecate face underneath, smooth skin, not a spec of facial hair, his eyes were purple (rare eyes) like a kunzite gem, his eyelashes were crystal white, his jawline was perfectly slick and not too much and not too little, his lips were soft and pink.
His hair cascaded down his back to his hips and was straight as a needle, it was perfectly silky and smooth and was white a snow. His skin was icey pale too. He almost looked too good to be true, like a mythical beauty of a glacial forest in a story. There he sat with ____ by his side like always.
That way the reader will be willful to take their time to read through each sentence
Next is dialogue, when someone is speaking you can skip to a new line, for example:
"Are you alright?", He questioned.
Or
Y/N: "Oh my, are you okay?"
Always remember where your punctuation marks belong too.
