You're an amazing writer. The way you bring characters in and out of scenes, making them relevant. And making sure we don't forget them . I love how you wrote the female lead. Patience is a brilliant character. I admire the layout of how you showed us why she is the way she is. I mean there's always a reason people are jaded. And the way you brought that out instead of telling us everything in the beginning was so clever. I'm thoroughly enjoying reading this. Thank you for sharing.