lawpez109

Thank You so so so so so so so so much for following me back!!!! If you want I can make a story about Avril Lavigne or Taylor Swift meeting you in a story and it is specially made for you! A big thank you!!! I am just making a story for a sign of Thank You!! Please reply if you want to! ^_^

lawpez109

:) Thank You :)
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blackroses250

@Fanfiction109 Your Welcome!!!! and Thank you for following me as well! You don't have to right me a story!! Just thank you for following me, you seem like a super sweet person
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pxptarts

Thanks for the follow :) I followed back❤ and if you ever need a book to read you can check out my book Elijah and give me feedback and I can do the same for your books!!

blackroses250

@pxptarts  thanks for the feedback as well :) I have to admit I didn't like that Boom!! at all and was trying to think of way to change it.
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pxptarts

@Tayril_2217 thanks for the feedback :) and I intended for the chapters to be short but yeah it could've have been better if there were longer ones, I totally agree. 
            
            As for your book Red Roses, I'll admit I was pretty scared to start it since I don't usually go for those types of stories but it was actually pretty well written in my eyes. I actually don't have any criticism other than when you said "Boom!!" I feel like it might have been more alluring if it was just "Boom" but in italics. But really it was good! (this is getting long so I'll stop haha)
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blackroses250

@pxptarts I read your book Eligah and I normaly don't like books like that, but I really did like that. The only thing you might want to do is make the chapters longer but other than that it was great.
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