@killyourheroes Well, for several of the following reasons:
1) It was very, very shit... I can't believe I actually wrote that amount of shit!
2) I really didn't like it, and I was going to edit most of it out...
3) I've been bouncing between editing, working on other writing pieces, school work and personal things. I was going to update, but then I realised I wasn't about to spent time on something I didn't like.
4) I've started the heavy editing, and a LOT has changed. I can't stressssss that enough. I'm hoping it's better.
5) It wasn't getting a good response, so I'm actually very touched that you care :-))))
I've been deliberating whether or not to post the edit, but I don't know yet. There's another story I kinda want to do, and I have Scrapper's Moon which is supposed to be like my own supernatural world and a spin of from Mere Mortal but in a lot more detail.
Thanks for your time, though, and I hope you understand :-)))