@ThatAnimeGirl-Maka
I'd have to say that the story to have written, 'the new animatronic' is amazing so far. I have actually added it to my library to keep on reading.
The only thing that you should do, is make a new paragraph every time someone talks, so readers can understand who is talking.
Otherwise, like I said, it is a great story, and I am glad that I have read it. I can't wait to keep reading XD