blazeoface

@ThatAnimeGirl-Maka 
          	I'd have to say that the story to have written, 'the new animatronic' is amazing so far. I have actually added it to my library to keep on reading. 
          	The only thing that you should do, is make a new paragraph every time someone talks, so readers can understand who is talking. 
          	Otherwise, like I said, it is a great story, and I am glad that I have read it. I can't wait to keep reading XD

ThatAnimeGirl-Maka

@Blue_Wolf_ awwwwww!! Thank you -////- yea I just started writing a few months ago so....yea 0////0 thank you for giving love to.it -/////- ill praise ye forever!!!:D
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blazeoface

@ThatAnimeGirl-Maka 
          I'd have to say that the story to have written, 'the new animatronic' is amazing so far. I have actually added it to my library to keep on reading. 
          The only thing that you should do, is make a new paragraph every time someone talks, so readers can understand who is talking. 
          Otherwise, like I said, it is a great story, and I am glad that I have read it. I can't wait to keep reading XD

ThatAnimeGirl-Maka

@Blue_Wolf_ awwwwww!! Thank you -////- yea I just started writing a few months ago so....yea 0////0 thank you for giving love to.it -/////- ill praise ye forever!!!:D
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