HetBookWorm
Het this side!
BuelurBelongWithMe
I'm not judging your work since it was your first story, but in the next part please add more characters and add depth to them. It'd turn out to be really good.
BuelurBelongWithMe
@BuelurBelongWithMe Makes sense. Since you're a beginner short chapters will keep you motivated to finish the book. But make sure in order to make the chapter short you don't end up cutting up the main core of the story, my upcoming work is somewhat similar to your work, can I borrow one of the character from your story if you don't mind?
blehblehbleh_24
@BuelurBelongWithMe hey... thankyou. it's supposed to have more characters. I'm thinking of shortening the length of each chapter so that I'm motivated to write more. A genuine thanks though, I had ignored this story for two years before i saw your comment