IvyRaven

Hi!!! 
          I wanted to ask you if you could read my story - hot blood turning cold - and tell me what you honestly think by way of commenting or voting. It would be a big help but I understand if you don`t have the time. 
          I would of course return the favor if you want me to. I hope you like it. 
          Much love!!! <3 <3 <3

maryasha

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls