EmilyCharlotteCooledge

Hey there!
          
          So I just thought I'd swing by and say thank you so much for voting on my novel PROJECT GEMINI! I really appreciate the support and can only apologise that this is so late too!  I do hope you enjoy the rest of Eva's story, I hope to have chapter eight out by the end of this week if you're interested. Look forward to hearing your thoughts on it! 
          
          All the best,
          
          -E.C.Cooledge :) x

EmilyCharlotteCooledge

@Camillia28 
            
            Hey!
            
            Thanks for the feedback. I'll add it into the second draft. That bit with Dr. Hillary was intended to be a bit chaotic to add to the irrationality of the scene, but you raised some good points. I'll clarify it in the second draft. 
            
            Gemini is a reference to the star sign. (E.g. Gemini, Aries, Leo, Pisces etc) So because I'm born in June, my star sign is a Gemini. Gemini is quite often represented as the twins which is why it's super important to the book. But in this novel Gemini has a double meaning that'll be hinted towards in the next few chapters. 
            
            But thanks for voting on the latest chapters btw! Really appreciate it!
            
            Have a good night! :)
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blowing_minds

@EmilyCharlotteCooledge 
            
            Hi! (Again!)
            
            I found the bit with Dr Hillary kind of confusing, bit I'm pretty sure it's meant to be like that and will be unraveled in time, but there was a lot going on at that particular part of the story so that also explains the confusion, I guess.
            Sorry, I'm kind of hyper because I just spent 4 hours straight writing my health project and I'm kind of sleep deprived. I just have to many things to do! ... School sucks.
            You're a really good writer and right with a lot of detail, and the only thing I have is that when some one is talking, you end it like this:
            "Hi,"
            It should be ended like this:
            "Hi."
            When there is someone sort of detail on the speaker, then it's a comma. Like,
            "Hi," she said.
            The story is really good so far and I look forward to more.
            A quick question, what does Gemini mean?
            
            It was nice to meet you as well, you seem like a lovely person! ^-^
            
            Stay Happy E.C.Cooledge,
            (A very tired) Camillia28
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EmilyCharlotteCooledge

@Camillia28 
            
            Hello again! 
            
            Thank you! I'm glad you like the concept. I'm quite glad you told me that you were confused too, which bits confused you? It's only a first draft so anything you can tell me would be much appreciated for the second draft :) 
            No worries! I do try to go around and make sure I thank everyone personally, it'd feel rude if I didn't especially when people vote and comment :) 
            
            Nice to meet you too by the way! :D
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