RandomFandoms93

Thank you for following me! I've just checked out ur book and what I can say is that it's really good and has good length to the 1st chapter, also has a lot of potential to continue being a great story with decently likable characters  (If a character is an ass or a plain dish rag I'd probably not vote or bother commenting), Alina seems like a nice enough girl for me to continue and I'd love to see how and why she really got into fighting or learned to fight since she's young and fighting for a living comes with time, I'd also like to see why her Uncle wouldn't forgive her so they can't go back to him. She and her brother definitely have a lot of potential and I'd love for you to continue writing the story :)
          Randy xxx

blp575

Thanks for checking it out! That’s why I stopped reading this book called the Red Queen. The main character for me was just too much of a snob  so I really appreciate that! There’s a lot to come so I hope you enjoy it ❤️
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