blu3pixx
regarding "skype"; what do you want more of. text conversations or descriptions in 3rd person omniscient
writeicanwow
@blu3pixx hmmm.... thats hard to say. First of all, since the story is called "skype" and focuses more on the text conversations, you cant really take them out, or else that would deprive the story of one of its topics. On the other hand, the third person omniscient furthers the plot more, and can be more descriptive than the text messages. The both have pros and cons, so its really your job to decide!