Hi :) I'm sorry for the late reply but you asked which story I was reading. I'm reading Fight For What You Want. I like it because it has a different concept and I'm looking forward to seeing how you pursue this. I can't pretend I know how to make it better - I'm just a reader and I'm usually in awe of people who can actually write something haha. I'm a big fan of showing, rather then telling though. I'm pretty sure thats really difficult though haha. I look forward to more reading!