Interesting story you set up for "Four of Them" story. I wanted to add that you have a few grammarical errors, run-ons and fragments, so if you need a beta editor/reader I'll be happy to look it over and help your polish your story.
Hey, i love your book the four of them so far and i would really like to read more sssssoooooo........... PRETTY PLEASE UPLOAD AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!! Thank you ^_^