Heather

@dolphinash93 When your writing and describing something its so professional yet when your characters talk they sound so different try to make it sound like your text then it will be marvelous! :D 

Thanks, I really appreciate that. And, yes, I’ve gotten that criticism from several people.. Can you tell me why exactly you think it sounds fake and forced? I wanna know so I can fix it 

If you have time can you please comment on my story The White Rosebush? its a historical romance

@insightful_dream Oh my bad ill write more :D

@bluerosa 
          Cause you havent uploaded much yet :P

@insightful_dream thnx :D i didnt really think anyone liked my story

You should seriously upload :P

hey there :D