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Hello there, how's your day been ? I've been working on this new book lately and I thought maybe you'd like to take a peek ? tell me your opinion https://www.wattpad.com/story/113795211-los-angeles

Your good at writing. Chu just need to write longer chapters and write faster cause curiosity killed a cat! So yeah I actually cant believe its your first time writing !! It's weird isnt it?!