Hi! I'm Elena. I just finished reading your story The Journal. It's great, but I have a few tips to give. 1- please make sure your spelling is correct. 2- please your correct punctuation. I don't understand the whole story and I'm getting lost. 3- please also make sure that when your writing, you don't skip a few parts or details that you should tell the audience. I didn't understand the whole concept of it. I don't mean to be rude or anything, but I just wanted to be helpful. Just keep going and you'll get even better! :)
