book_worm345

Forgot to tell you, it's called 'Fixing the Broken (Draco love story)'

Bookworm180203

Hey! I was wondering if you would take a look at my story. Its called twisted fairytales. If you cant its fine its just its my first story on wattpad and i wanna know how im doing, where i can improve and stuff.

book_worm345

Ok so I've read the first chapter and it's amazing so far! Only thing I can think of is put in paragraphs? Such as after the introduction , before the "Ariel" bit, and when you're repeating something put a paragraph before it to make it more tense
            
            Hope that made sense :)
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Bookworm180203

@Bookworm180203 thanks for following me!!
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Bookworm180203

@Bookworm180203 thanks for following me☺
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