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Oh! There's another chapter! I didn't realize that, sorry :p Okay, I'll edit that asap :)

Hey thanks for critiquing Twin Flames, I will work on it asap. I've noticed a lot of people say it's confusing is this because of the girl that speaks or because of the dreams or just the overall way I write it. I know I have horrible issues with commas, sigh. but thank you for helping out with that. :)

alright I'll do this for you, just cause you're a Tamora Pierce fan ;D no I'm just kidding, but yeah, no problem :)

Girl, we must be sisters. I LOVE the Tamora Pierce series! Anyways, back to what I originally messaged you for:
          I am writing a fantasy book called "Imprisoned Harmony" and it's as realistic as fantasy gets. Please go and check it out- you'll love it. Happy reading! Also, if you could let me know if the main character (Enna, as you will come to know her) is likable, that would be great. I need to know whether or not she is too whiny or single-minded for the situation she is in. Thanks, it would be much appreciated.