bookaholic91

@HollylLouisel94 ye sure xx

BroadwayAstronaut

Hi! I know a lot of people find these annoying but at this point I'm desperate! I'm just starting a new story called Straight to the Heart. It's about a girl named Hope who has a dark past. When cute new guy Jessie shows up and for the first time since she left her past behind her she begins to feel something for another guy. The day she decides to once and for all leave her past behind her and open up to Jessie is the day that her past finally catches up to her. So now Hope has two choices; to shut down and hide from her past but in doing so she loses Jessie or opening up to Jessie and facing her past once and for all. I would really love it if you could read it. I only have 1 1/2 chapters up so far but I will be adding more shortly. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! Thank you so much for reading this and I will gladly return the favor if you ever need it. Thank you so much! :D

dead-fantasy

hello, how are doing?
          i was just wondering if had some spare time to read my story
          "my new life, in the werewolfs claw"
          it would be wonderfull to get some feedback
          
          hope you enjoy it
          hugs
          d-Fantasyxoxox 
          
          Singing, playing the violin, studying like crazy and lastly enjoying the little free time she has with her friends- this is all she needed and all she wanted- a normal life.
          Kala, an honor student, living in Vienna with her oh- so- happy-family, is always under pressure to be the best, and to preserve the family name.
          Her past has been filled with gruesome memories, she tries to hide and forget- but there are scars unable to heal on her heart and mind.
          
          One night she becomes witness and victim to a murder, and almost loses her life, which was saved by Aaron,- who now owns it. 

MoonStonex

'll keep this as short as possible!! I'm Lady Soha, and I'd love if you could read the beginnings of either of these two stories and maybe comment, vote, or fan if you haven't: 
          1)MY FATHER'S SLAVE: TALES OF A RAPE VICTIM 
          This is a story about a girl named Tabbi who has been constantly raped night after night by her father after her mother's death. 
          2)INFECTED: YEAR 3004 
          This is about a girl named Neph who lives in the year 3004 and is set to die after she caught the deadly disease of the Spikes. 
          
          Take your pick, please read, etc. Thanks! 
          
          Lady Soha @-'--,--

HollylLouisel94

Hey, could you please read my new story - there is nothing - and maybe give me some feedback? i would really appreciate it :D ....
          
          ... or if you wud prefer to read something completed then maybe - the maze - 
          (And neither of them are vampire stories if you want a change :D x)