booki3pd

Guys. I need y'all's opinion. Should i rewrite Gone, or keep the original plot line. Please send me a message on what i should do. I cant decide.

obraztsova

The plot line is really good but you should put a couple of the first few chapters together the beginning flows better. It might also be good to get an editor to help you with grammar and give you advice. I would love to edit for you :)