bookmaniac95

Sure no problem. I actually read it in one go, so I'm going to be honest with you. I think it's a good story and it can be even better, but what's got me confused is the way the story flaws. For example: how did brad and brook fall in love with each other when the only words they've exchanged are "Tell anyone about this..."? Or how did Camille get captured when she is an agent trained to fight vampires. I have to admit even with those questions I became slightly obsessed with the story and started making possible scenarios! Please update soon ;)

bookmaniac95

Sure no problem. I actually read it in one go, so I'm going to be honest with you. I think it's a good story and it can be even better, but what's got me confused is the way the story flaws. For example: how did brad and brook fall in love with each other when the only words they've exchanged are "Tell anyone about this..."? Or how did Camille get captured when she is an agent trained to fight vampires. I have to admit even with those questions I became slightly obsessed with the story and started making possible scenarios! Please update soon ;)