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Hey there, Would you mind checking https://my.w.tt/fF8pw8Uro5 out. I'm trying to work on something new, and I was hoping you caould help me, and tell me if its worth a shot. Thank youu. Hope you have a great day
booknerd0008
I think it’s a good idea and you have a good start. I’m not sure if I personally would be that interested in reading the whole book, only because I’m a girl and so the point of view is not super relatable to me. I like the concept tho, it’s fairly interesting. I’d say just watch out for stereotyping; make sure that your characters have depth and dimension to them, because your characters more than anything else are what are going to keep your readers hooked. Keep at it tho, you’ve got a great start!
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