Amanda

I'm not sure if it's even worth a proper review but I have written the opening of something and I am just seeking some general feedback on just the basic style and format. 
          It's called 'the monster of man' and will fit in the horror genre through the exploration of the duplicity of man and the sinister desires which can become suppressed. 
          George is the main character and he will be the mouthpiece for this view. I would really appreciate just a bit of feedback on the general flow and style. Thanks! 

hey :-)
          
          •title
          Pizza Boy ☏ taekook
          
          •summary
          In which Taehyung orders pizza not for the food, but to see the delivery boy with the bunny smile.
          
          ★ boyxboy
          ★ alternate universe
          
          ★ status: ongoing
          
          © 2017 sugabear_
          
          •genre
          fanfiction
          
          •link
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/131580730-pizza-boy-☏-taekook
          
          •please note- the first part is information, warnings and a copyright notice; actual writing begins in the second part :-)

Title: The Survivor                                 Summary: An action novel part of #ProjectWomanUp and #EndRomanticisedAbuse about a woman escaping from an abusive relationship                         Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/88203506-the-survivor-projectwomanup-endromanticizedabuse

Hi I was wondering if you would take a look at my story the title is How To Be A Horrible Person, it's actually my memoir, so it's in the non fiction category, growing up I had a lot of issues with my mother being a prescription drug addict, my boyfriend cheated on me with my bestfriend and my other love interest ended up being gay, it's a funny sad serious look at being a teenager and learning how to deal with all the buls**t I hope you'll check it out as I would love a review from you ❤️❤️

Hi :) 
          
          I was wondering if you could give me feedback on my first book, called Bad Boy Uncovered My Secret, if you have time? (The books title might be changed to Living Secrets).
          
          Summary:  The art of lies and betrayal was new to LeAnna. 
          
          LeAnna's life is a complex mess of tangled secrets and she's barely getting keeping herself together.  When the responsibility of protecting her little sister falls to her, LeAnna decides its time to start over.
          
          LeAnna couldn't afford to get swept up in trivial high school drama. 
          
          Unfortunately it's hard not to get involved when she meets Hunter Frost - an irresistibly, infuriating bad boy who has made it his life mission to uncover all her secrets. 
          
          Ever since they met, Hunter couldn't help but be drawn in by her mysterious, fun nature. However, when LeAnna keeps backing away with each step Hunter takes forward, he finds it hard to give up the chase.
          
          Hunter loves a challenge. This one he refuses to lose.
          
          The only question left is: Is Hunter, the boy who could potentially ruin her life, a friend or foe?
          
          Genre: Teen Fiction.
          
          Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/68600195-bad-boy-uncovered-my-secret

It's called random 2am thoughts really what the title says and the link is http://my.w.tt/UiNb/b5XdhuQ1Ht pleeeeeease and thank you

Hey there! If you have the time (because I'm sure your busy) could you please give me feedback on my book the Children of Time? If you could it would be greatly appreciated:) 

Can you check out my book and see how it is? Maybe give me some advice about it??

I hope you like my story and if you don't please give feedback . Thank you so much !

Name : Amnesia
          Genre : Mystery 
          Summary : Paige Locke loses her memory due to a tragic experience which she doesn't remember . Paige lets her past go and continues her life as an average teen but little does she know that her life is in danger .
          Link : http://w.tt/1K3INui