@MythicalUnicorns03
thanks for reading! i really appreciate all the support you have given my book. anyway, for tips, i believe you just have to write what comes to mind. also, read, read, read, read. for my book, i have read countless fanfics that aren't even from the same fandom my story was from. reading some peoples story could trigger something in your mind that would make you want to do something that's a little similar or something that escalates very quickly. anyway, just make sure to write down anything that comes to mind. write it down on a piece of paper or on your hand to write later on. and, if you have too much of an imaginative mind like me, ideas will pop into your head very often as long as you still want to write.
also, one MAJOR tip: if someone comes across your story and decides to personal message you, telling you the book sucks and need a lot of improvement, tell them, "ok. i'll fix up my story." and be done with it. don't pick a fight and don't try to pick a fight. now, if that person is really really rude about telling you, just tell them to go shove a stick up their a$$.
alas, my dear friend, i hope your book does well. also, be sure to stick around since my book is not done yet and i may or may not be doing a sequel. once again, thank you for reading my book and come talk to me if you ever need any help or if you're stuck on something.
best of luck to you!