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@pettae yeah i know you were going for the short story, but seeing as though what the topic is, and how u wanted to not get into detail too much, it kinda, atleast for me, defeated the purpose of informing people of the illness. 
          nontheless, the book it's story-telling technique seemed good to me and about 12k people have enjoyed the book, so i suppose u can give urself a pat on the shoulder. 
          I havent read any of your other stories yet, but since they dont seem to have such a rough topic to write, like jimin's one, i think i'll enjoy them more.
          keep writing i'd say, cheers!

@pettae  i guess i just didnt like the way you displayed i all. it could be just my oversensitive ass who has experienced it myself but idk..
          where was all of the struggle? i know jimin thought things like "i hate myself" and "i am fat" but considering the fact that at the end of the book he even killed himself by starvation, it all didnt seem too dark enough/ too much. i know thinking those things are dark, yes, but i didnt see the real torture.
          i didnt see the part of where he lost control over starving, too clearly. 
          i didnt see the period near his death in which he has completely lost it.
          i didnt see the details of having such a torturous mind. the pain, the discomfort, the suicidal thoughts, or just more than "i am a pig" and "i am fat".
           Seeming as thought it was a fic in which jimin is in the band, it also looked extremely unrealistic, since he would have probably been hospitalised atleast ONCE before he died, since people are around him a lot of time.  where was that?
          i just dont think it respresented how it ALL could REALLY look like, enough. 
          sorry, but the lack of.. of writing and details made this story, made jimin, look so foolish and amateuristic