Hey there! I read your story like you asked me to so here is a few thoughts after reading it:
1) the guy is really...how should I put it? If I have a knife, I'd butcher him up.
2) your storyline is good, I can tell that it is original
3) watch out for the names, please. One of the chapters the names get mixed up.
4) the main character has a pretty tough attitude, though it would have been cooler if she was tougher and more stubborn. The only flaw is that she is too much like most stories where the main girl ended up falling in love with her kidnapper...I hope she doesn't turn out like most heroines because this story is really original.
5) all around this story is pretty good, watch out for some spelling error though.
I have so much more to say, but I will just leave it as that. Hope to see more of this story soon.