@memorycraver Hi Alankrita!
I usually do not comment and resort to voting to express my appreciation. However lemme assure you that this feedback is not just a reply to your message.
I came across this book nearly a week ago on insta. The suspense, cliffhangers and cute family moments amidst all those along with your vocabulary and the way of writing got me so hooked that I couldn't stop myself from finishing all the chapters at a go and eagerly wait for the upcoming chapters! Especially the poem and the scene where the ML cradles the diary, leans against the book case and glides down it to settle on the floor in chap 25.?! I could actually see him doing it infront of my eyes.
Sometimes I actually wonder ki "yaar, kahaan se aathe hai ae log? Matlab inki imagination, vocabulary, writing skills, perception of things, way of thinking and views on life, relationships, social issues etc., ithne kamaal hai ki, ya tho ek acha sa movie ban sakta hai, ya tho awareness creat kar sakte hai!" while reading books on wattpad. And this one is among those books and authors!
So yeah it was worth my time and I hope you keep writing such chapters and books.
Well that was long but yeah I'm enjoying the book. Thank you!
-Nikhs