bpolen77

If you all could check out my story and tell me what you think I would be more than happy to repay and do the same

sharks55

Read your story. A little blunt but other than that okay. I think you should work on developing characters a little more and making them individuals. Try making a sheet of their personalties before you start writing. Your stories also go quickly and I get lost. Fix that and you will be good

bpolen77

Hahaha(: I get that a lot. I'm a very blunt person in real life so hopefully now that I have an editor my stories will improve! Also, I will try your personalities sheet thing. Sounds helpful. Thanks for the reads(:
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