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chapter 9, out now bitches, have fun reading.
REMEMBER! this book is a slow burn, so don't expect me to make them fall in love already, thanks.
ENJOY!
much love, xoxo
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bqngtandfs
chapter 8 is out already, party people.
it's the longest chapter i've ever written so, sit back, grab some tea and enjoy this chapter.
please give me some feedback, i love reading comments and it's my way to stay motivated.
enough yapping, have fun reading
much love, xoxo
<3<3<3<3
Evrydyhope_06
Heyy, I have a big question for you!
Lately, I came up with an idea for a story that’s not part of the fanfiction world, since I’m also interested in writing original stuff—and maybe one day I’d even like to write a real book.
I’ve already started working on a detailed (but not completely finished) PDF to plan everything out, and I’m looking for someone who’d be interested in taking a look and giving me some constructive feedback!
I immediately thought of you, because I really like the way you structure your writing, and I thought maybe you'd be up for helping me out^^
What’s important to me:
An opinion on whether the world I’ve built feels plausible and engaging
If the character development makes sense and feels realistic
If the structure is easy to follow and well-organized
And maybe some pointers about any plot holes, logic gaps, or areas for improvement!
It doesn’t have to be professional feedback, but I’d really appreciate hearing from someone who’ll give me more than just “yeah, it’s good,” like my friends or family would.
The document is in German, but if you're interested, I can translate it into English for you.
I’d be super thankful for any feedback—but no pressure at all! Only if you feel like doing it. Don’t feel obligated^^
Since Wattpad doesn’t have DMs anymore, I’d switch over to Instagram if you’re interested (or whatever platform works best for you—just let me know).
And if you’d like, I’d be happy to take a look at your concept and give you feedback in return!
(I’ve never done something like this before either, so it’d be a first for me too haha)
Take your time thinking about it if you want. Its a big request, i know- no pressur about this!
I’d love to work together on this ( ̄▽ ̄)
Thanks so much for reading and considering—it really means a lot!!
Have a beautiful day (*つ´・∀・)つ♡
@Evrydyhope_06
bqngtandfs
@Evrydyhope_06 Hi! i'd love to give u feedback. it means alot to me that you asked me to help. i feel honoured. i don't mind which platform we switch too, on instagram i only have my personal account with my life on it. ( which i wouldn't mind sharing with u tho ) if you could translate it in english, that'd be great! and i'd love your feedback when i start chapter 9! much love, xoxo <3<3<3<3
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chapter 7 is published.
let me know what y’all think sor far, even tho i might be a bit too predictable when it comes to writing, oopsies….
and for the ones who might think this book is boring, this is a slow burn, so stuff will happen but it’ll take some chapters ( alot )
ANYWAYS, let me know what we think of the nickname “ punchy “
HONESTLY i thought it was clever, but maybe it’s cringe I DONT KNOW
well, i hope you enjoy reading!
much love, xoxo
<3<3<3<3
Evrydyhope_06
@ bqngtandfs Punchy is cute, even tough its not ,,suprising", its givin PerSonAliTy and it's predictable in a satisfying way, so dontt worry to much abt it>v<
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Evrydyhope_06
Danke für deinen Follow( ^∀^)♡