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@AmberBayes Whenever you're ready. Take care of real life. Wattpad will be here waiting :P

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@AmberBayes Thank you so much for following. :D
            If man x man is something you're into or want to try out then I invite you to read my stuff - I'd love some feedback as well :P.
            If it's not your thing - no problem. I know it's not for everyone.

@YuukaSumiko thank you so much for your advice! I will continue with the story and go back through and fix some stuff :) this was very helpful and you are gaining a follower  I appreciate this so much! And love that you enjoy the story so far! I already have the end in mind so stay tuned. 

One more thing. The ratio of show vs tell is very important and delicate in your current style. You have a bit more tell than my taste, I repeat it's also a question of taste. Maybe hold back a bit on the 'tell' and focus on 'show' a little more - 'show' is more engaging for the reader and speaks volumes, while tell spoon feeds the reader information that they are usually reluctant to take at face value.
            I liked how you showed Jax's character and type through his entrance into class and his mannerism. I was 'meh' about how Maggie and Belle hit it off 'in tell' while on the ride home. I hope this helps. Ok, now I'm really out. I can be overbearing, I know.