bratneykairi

hey guys, if someone could be kind to mentor me? that'd be awesome. I have problems with using commas too much. run along sentences, really. and using P.o.v, without being awkward. any tips?

Wendizzy

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Haha you know I base his personality off of my husband. We have a very similar relationship... on minus the magic genie powers lol. He's a total lovable asshole though ;,)
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bratneykairi

@Wendizzy you're so awesome! How could I not? Haha, we all need a Brady in our lives xD
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Wendizzy

Thank you for voting and commenting on A Lovely Nightmare:) I hope you're enjoying. I would be more than happy to help you out in any way I can. :) thanks again you're awesome
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bratneykairi

hey guys, if someone could be kind to mentor me? that'd be awesome. I have problems with using commas too much. run along sentences, really. and using P.o.v, without being awkward. any tips?

Wendizzy

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Haha you know I base his personality off of my husband. We have a very similar relationship... on minus the magic genie powers lol. He's a total lovable asshole though ;,)
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bratneykairi

@Wendizzy you're so awesome! How could I not? Haha, we all need a Brady in our lives xD
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Wendizzy

Thank you for voting and commenting on A Lovely Nightmare:) I hope you're enjoying. I would be more than happy to help you out in any way I can. :) thanks again you're awesome
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MindPancake

Hi, Welcome to wattpad!

MindPancake

Woah. That sounds like it's going to be crazy and cool.
            
            I bet it'll be fun to write.
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bratneykairi

@Mindpancake a boy who is the outcast of the school with a supernatural secret, and the girl who is an undercover assassin. they see each other in their dreams, and she sticks up for him when he's getting pushed around. that's all I have in my summary.
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MindPancake

Alright. 
            
            I wish you luck. 
            
            What's this story about?
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