bratzyprincesso

Do anyone have any ideas for my book plz

bratzyprincesso

bratzyprincesso

@bratzyprincesso omggg thank you sooo much I try that just the opening.
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peacockbluegreen

@bratzyprincesso okay I'm done. It's really good so far, it does need a bit of editing for spelling and grammatical errors but the description is good. I just think we need a bit more insight into the sadistic nature of the guys who are hurting the main character. It needs to be a bit more shocking. But besides that it's great! 
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