Hi.
A little bit of constructive criticism, I hope you don’t mind. But In your book Mute, in Kellin’s POV you say ‘ I say nothing just’ a lot in unnecessary areas. For example‘I say nothing just nod’. You could get rid of all of these and put something like ‘I nod’ or ‘ I nodded’ instead. To much repetition can be really annoying for readers, cause it feels like almost every paragraph your reiterating that he’s mute and by the 10th chapter it gets old.
Again hope you don’t mind the criticism. I like to try and help out authors where I can. Your book is really good and I’ll be sure to read the others that I haven’t.