breeloveswriting

This week, I’m working on editing Where My Heart Lies. I noticed there are some missing spaces in between chapters, and there needs to be more outside of Dominic and Nicole’s relationship since it seems to be moving too fast in my opinion. So, if you see me un-publishing some chapters don’t freak out, I just need to take remove them in order to add chapters in between, since Wattpad won’t allow you to add new chapters in the middle. The chapters I un-publish will be re-published, so don’t fret. It may take me a bit longer to write since I got some way too long acrylics and they’ve proven to be a pain in the butt, but I’ll see ya’ll soon with a new update! 
          	
          	Lots of love,
          	Bree <33

shrikhareads

Hey! 
          I am a writer and have been trying to get my work around and am currently working on a book which has like 20 chapters published. But its really hard for me to garner attention towards it as its not a love story. Its a new take on a upper middle class girl's life. I hope you will give it a try.
          Thanking you
          Shrikha
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/295360806-advaita-malhotra-the-dreamer

selflovesquad

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halfwaytohell23

Hi there. I happened to have stumbled across your acc and I really liked your book. Keep going. Do check my new work if you have time as well.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/304021622?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=halfwaytohell23&wp_originator=FVR2L3ofd86OINdqoKhCuwLAx4a42I6qYexp%2FLqgbru7hq8YTRWeZ6UvzurLz7tOzDnGWte%2FgLv072LlWs%2FoDe%2FM%2BvA7Kmsuifs48ClhuHBcpLJ1pSdv09Th%2F4KtV4y9

breeloveswriting

This week, I’m working on editing Where My Heart Lies. I noticed there are some missing spaces in between chapters, and there needs to be more outside of Dominic and Nicole’s relationship since it seems to be moving too fast in my opinion. So, if you see me un-publishing some chapters don’t freak out, I just need to take remove them in order to add chapters in between, since Wattpad won’t allow you to add new chapters in the middle. The chapters I un-publish will be re-published, so don’t fret. It may take me a bit longer to write since I got some way too long acrylics and they’ve proven to be a pain in the butt, but I’ll see ya’ll soon with a new update! 
          
          Lots of love,
          Bree <33

breeloveswriting

Writing is a difficult task. Authors have moments of inspiration, and moments where inspiration runs dry. I myself choose not to have a writing schedule because I struggle with this virus that authors commonly have. My goal is to post at least once a week, if not more. Life is challenging. Things happen. Chaos occurs. If I can’t get around to updating then I’ll certainly let you guys know, but if not, you can expect an update from me 1-2 times a week. I find that there is no need for a posting/writing schedule when I myself can’t even predict when I’ll have those little bursts of inspiration. I hope you all can understand this.
          
          Lots of love,
          Bree <33

breeloveswriting

@lex4044 asked for advice on her book, and tips on how to engage with the readers. 
          
          I appreciate the question! It's a bit difficult for me to answer, but I'll certainly give all the tips and information I know and have learned. 
          
          As far as engaging with your readers goes, I've learned it's super important to be as descriptive with your stories as possible. For example, instead of saying, "I stared at the guy. His blonde hair, colorful eyes, and tanned skin had me in another reality," I've found it's better to over-describe than to under-describe. It's also super helpful if you're looking for a bigger, fancier word, to look up synonyms for whatever word it is that you want to make better. So, if we're using the sentence above, we could look up synonyms for "another reality" and see what pops up. I came up with the word, verisimilitude. Big word, right? Adding these bigger and more descriptive words can impress your readers and leave them wondering what you meant, further engaging them into the story.  But it's important to remember not to use these fancy words too often. If you use words that the reader can't understand all the time, they won't be able to understand what's going on. Just when you want a little extra spice, throw in a word or too that isn't too complicated, but will definitely impress your readers. As far as describing your characters and sentences, I've found it's super important to describe what main characters look like in stories, but if the character won't have a main role in the book, then don't feel the need to describe them too much. So, if we're using the sentence up above and using the advice given above, we can correct this. "I stared, awestruck at the guy towering over me. His short, blonde hair, his mesmerizing green eyes, and tanned, glowing skin that looked so soft but almost even rough to touch as well, were all a breathtaking verisimilitude." 
          
          I hope this helps your question, and feel free to ask any others!
          Lots of love,
          -Bree <3