Hi. Im Highkeyonfleek and I just wanted tk give you tips on writing your books. You may habe wayyy more followers but my storys get over 200 views a week. To the advice oart. I recently started reading the book about Kayley (sorry if i spelled it wrong) and tyga. Im barely dont but I wanna recomend you do your conversations diffrent like 'hey daddy' she said 'good morning baby girl' i responded. But thats not it another thing is do not shorten your words. Like idk or ig. Some people may not know what it means. Lastly do not use emojis unless your u showing a text conversation.
This advice is from writter to writter.
I just wanted to help you succeed, i hope you didnt take this the wrong way cause I love your books in fact I wont stop reading either. Byee