Brenda McCreight

Thank-you so much. i hope you enjoy it and yes, i have read yours and i think they're great!!!
          teamdimka  xoxo

@teamdimka Hi, I'm happy to read your story. I will get to it next week and give you some feedback. Have you read the beginnings of mine? 
          
          Brenda

hey Brenda, i know your an author so can u read my story? it's my first time and i also want to be an author myself when i grow up so can u just read through it and give me some pointers on my second story?

Glad my feedback was useful. I'll keep checking your work as you post it -  I'd like to continue with your story. Moussie is a good writer too = you can keep each other encourage!. I'll be posting more of mine so I hope you'll read it and give me feedback. I would like your opinion on the Shay James story, which is not fantasy so may not be in your interest line, but if you have nothing better to do sometime, I would appreciate any comments you have. Looking forward to more of your writing.  

I've also posted the first two chapters of my short story book and a self help book. Take a look at them all when you have time. I'm eager to have feedback on everything. 

@Mousie Hi, I just read your pages, I like them - it looks like the beginning of a good story. I would suggest you give a reason for not calling 911 or for why the parents aren't there.Also, pouring alcohol in a wound would create tremendous pain (I was a nurse and coroner before becoming a therapist) and isn't recommended because the liquid can create more infection than it helps - so maybe just use the bandages. Anyway, it's a good story, keep going with it. 

@rednckchick08 Hi there, I just read your story quickly and liked it. I would read more, and that's what you want - you want readers to want to know more about these people. Check out your wording a bit - you use "almost" a couple of times very close together - I know that isn't the biggest deal in the world, but it's the type of thing that agents and editors don't like. Keep going on this story!

I am also new to wattpad Brenda, I was wondering if you could read my story, "Celebrating President's Day with a Bang" and give me some feedback on how i am doing. I am in the process of reading yours. Thank you in advance!

I'm new to Wattpad and looking forward to finding other ya fantasy and mystery writers. I'm posting the first chapters of the Lost Fury Chronicles and the first chapter of the Shay James mystery - I welcome all discussion and feedback.