ayeohfee

Oh my God, thank you so much for voting on my book! When I saw the votes had gone up, I started grinning crazily. The start is absolutely terrible, so, uh, when you get into the stories teen stages, it might make more sense  Have a great day :)

brenleymerritt

@Vowelgirl  you should get a friend to help you edit it, I know I do that a lot haha
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ayeohfee

Oh goodness, don't talk about editing with me, even Autocorrect can't help the first couple ( Actually, most of the book )  of chapters.  I was actually going to start revising over them today, I've tried to before, but, uh, I cringe easily. And my writing in cringe-y. Thanks for reading :)
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brenleymerritt

@Vowelgirl I actually really like your book. It needs some editing, but so far so good (:
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