@bri_k17
Hey guys !! I don't know if any of you really care or like my story but i just wanted to tell you sorry that it has been like 3 months since i last updated !! I am trying to post a new chapter sometime next week !! Whoever has stuck with this story so far please tell your friends and their friends to read it !! You won't regret it! i promise !!
@soccerwriter14 hey hey heyy! :)
@soccerwriter14 haha well then that's unfortunate hahaha! :) tell him I like his name tho!!
@soccerwriter14 haha tell him I'm sure he is if he looks like Channing tatum hahahaha xD
@soccerwriter14 nm getting ready for school :|
ugh i'm in my last class right now, during announcments. my friend Wade is watching me do this. he told me to say that he thinks he is hot xD
@soccerwriter14 no problem! it's true! :) so whatcha doin?
@soccerwriter14 thanks! and that book was so good that was in my top 5! :)
@soccerwriter14 okk thank you so much! I'm so new to this haha!! I've been wanting to write a book for a while so! :)
no problem :) i'm glad you started writing! :) i know that i was so nervous about writing The Coach's Daughter since it was my first story. and i know that as i wrote it and when i started my other books, i've become a better writer. so keep writing :)
@soccerwriter14 ohh okk!! I didn't want to keep putting like she said he said ect. is that bad if I do? :)
no it's good that your mixing it up :) but do use the word "said" :) i read somewhere that dialogue should flow, and the word "said" helps it do that :)
i think it was more so the dialogue that confused me. not who was speaking, but possibly the yelling :)
