maryasha

Boo! lol, i recently wrote two new stories and would love to get some constructive criticism. Let me know what you think of them :]
          
          MR. HOLIER THAN THOU
          Synopsis:
          He has a twisted sense of humor and he hates my hair colour. He feeds me chokoberries just so he can kiss me and taste them from my mouth.
          The bastard is my Master.
          Alston. The atrocious Fae.
          She has the ugliest hair he has ever seen and does not appreciate his amazing sense of humor. She loses her temper and her sharp tongue can outrun any Fae he has ever known.
          The urchin is my servant.
          Méav. The raven haired ecce.
          http://www.wattpad.com/271532-mr-holier-than-thou
          Quick Fact: Over 80% of the ppl who read the Chapter 1 continue on to read Chapter 2.
          Which % are you?
          
          SHATTERED HEARTS
          Synopsis:
          Life is an empty shell if there is no one there beside you to share it with. Celest knows that all too well. After overhearing her fiancé making love with her step-sister, she shatters. Her quiet reserve is pushed aside to let out a torrent of emotions that have been boiling for the past years.
          In an attempt to distance herself from all those who belittle her, she decides to take a long trip to South America. She finds herself taking a flight to Margarita Island with one other lone passenger on the plane.
          Too bad life doesn’t always work out as planned.
          http://www.wattpad.com/310538-shattered-hearts 

CathyL0v3

Yeah, you know what this is....[but you probably do them too :]
          Hi!!! I'm CathyL0v3, & could you read my stories ;) ?
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          Defying Stereotypes – A cute teen romance, where opposites attract, pissing everyone off as they do.
          
          Jenn – A cute little blonde who shys away from society, and is just trying finish her junior year peacefully. But fate has other plans, as she tries to hide from her gym teacher, skip class – on account of someone's persuasion, avoid, her tormenter and classmate, Honey, hate her best friend,  & fall for a completely off – limits guy.
          
          Christopher - Falls right back. And it doesn't help that Honey is – no not his exgirlfriend, that might be even better but, – his half sister. 
          
          Everybody else: Hates them for it or could care less. That is until a certain someone comes waltzing back into Jenn's life ready to take his spot in her life back, after leaving for two years. 
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          Keep Your heart, I Want Your Blood – A Hot-Hot-Hot Fantasy Story ;D
          Shifters, vampires, werewolves, at war with each other. Brutal attacks from werewolves directed at shifters, leave the shifters with no choice but an alliance...with vampires, one of there sworn enemies. Completely desperate they send June, a young teenage girl, along with her friends, include two very hot boys, Val and Just, off to protect high ranking, sexy vampires. A cute shifter wolf, a blood-sucking hotty, and an over protective best friend, all play a part in this story, causing whatever mayhem they can, but petty teen relationships aren't they're only problem...there's been a leak. The werewolves keep finding them, meaning only one thing...there's a traitor. But we can't forget jealous girlfriends, and boys who are in love with their best friend! Even though they're on an important mission, they can't seem to keep your hands off each other.
          -Everyone is obsessed with Just --> its no secret why ;) -
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          Stuck For Forty days With Seven Other Immature, Hormone – Driven Teenager. - Teen romance, with a bit of a twist ;)
          
          So government want's to study these kids? Alright, are they in for some drama...What happens when you mix, four teen girls, four teen boys, romance, jealousy, & undiscovered friendships? Nothing the government can't hand of course. Wrong. These kids were brought her against there will & they want out. The must set aside their difference, remove their eyes from whatever other teenager they are attracted too, and work together to escape. But some questions are more important...Will Landon & Emma – Beth ever realize they belong together? Will Delilah ever come out of her room long enough to see Hector staring at her? And will some one PLEASE tell Mark to get his hands off whatever girl he was them on at the moment? [Oh of course Mark..I'm free.] (;
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          Thanks – even if you dont look, BUT I REALLLLY HOPE YOU DO ;D
          I'll try to return the favor 
          
          - - - Always, CathyL0v3 - - -