Guiselle Martinez

I would like to start reading your story. But I try to read completed stories. There are just too many unfinished work here. Your teaser is interesting. So I would like you to finish your story. I would like to read it.

Hi everyone, sorry for the delay, is quite normal for me, i am not proud  of that  , but sometimes is not under my control . Anyway,  the next chapter is already done, but I am writing the next chapter, and in fact i am working in the next 3 chapters that will close the first arch of the story, so I want to publish the next 4 chapters together as an apology from one side, and also as a way to don't make you wait longer, as i am going to be a little be busy in August,  and if i don't take this moment to advance in the story where I am a little free, the nexts  chapters will delay more, so this post was basically to let you know that i didn't disappear, that the story is still alive,  and that I will be publishing the 4 chapters by the last week of July. Thanks for all your patience

New chapter is up, please enjoy.

The new chapter up, sorry for the delay I am terrible, I know but I am still working on doing better, hope you enjoy.

One more clue: 
          "Remember that part, my grandfather was livid with anger and shame, because at that moment still nobody knew about Sang Ji's affair with Shao Xin, so my aunt was treated as a slut who seduced the crown prince, and disgraced the clan of dragons” she remembered 
          
          "That's right, but Ye Hua, unlike Hao De's sons, was not daunted by his grandfather's yelling and threatening, he confronted Hao De, and literally sent him to hell. I've always believed that Zhe Yan let that part happen on purpose, because only after Ye Hua cut all ties with heaven did he allow it to be revealed who the true traitor was, and that it was the clan of dragons who should apologize on their knees for having been their prince who dishonoured his betrothal, and to the clan of nine-tailed foxes in their own palace” he admitted
          
          "I think you're right, I was in my grandparents' palace, when the news of the dragon prince's betrayal came, Zhe Yan's satisfied smile, and the evil gleam in his eyes caught my attention, but until today that you tell me all of this, I didn’t connect the situations" she confessed 
          
          “Zhe Yan was never agree with my decision of let it rule the heavens to Hao De. That was his way to tell me ¡I told you so!

Last one: 
          
          “Wait, she can reach him in dreams, as Ye Hua did with my aunt, but you also said that the bond does not allow any kind of distance. The coffin can keep them alive, and partially sane, but in the end the time was their enemy, much more as far as I understand before the supposed dead of Mo Yuan, he was already separated from my shifu. How does not they both ended dead or crazy at least” 
          
          “Ye Hua and your aunt were a different case from your shifu and Mo Yuan” he stated 
          
          “How different” she questioned confused 
          
          “Ye Hua and Bai Qian had a bond in progress, so the needed of contact was a thousand times stronger than in Ming Yun and Mo Yuan, in real during the period where Bai Qian was suspended and Ye Hua was growing they keep visiting each other in dreams, that was a necessity, to keep them both as healthy and alive as possible. Ye Hua may have had the body of a child, and even his consciousness developed along with his body, but his soul and subconscious were that of an adult, and as such he knew how to find his way to his mate, Because of that same subconscious in both, it was that both recognized each other when thousands of years later they met again. Your aunt had more problems since her memory was surrounded by a fog” he cleared up

Extract four: 
          Satisfied by her explanation, but a little jealous of the twin’s relationship with his woman, he decided to reveal a little secret of the youngest “Did your black twin dragon told you how he ended married with your aunt?”  
          
          “Did not was decided by my grandpa and the heavenly lord?” she naïve asked 
          
          “Do you know that Ye Hua is younger than Mo Yuan right?" he asked, to which she stated "Do you as well that he was a golden lotus for thousands of years?" he asked again, but I don't expect an answer "Some of those thousands of years coincided with the years in which your aunt was a disciple of Mo Yuan, and in which she was in charge of taking care of the golden lotus" he related “But I am sure you don’t know that the golden lotus can take human form in dreams, don’t you?” 
          
          Extract Five: 
          ¡Did you saw my aunt naked! she screamed 
          
          “Almost naked my love” he pointed out, but as she raised her eyebrow in disbelief, he added “True to be told, we didn´t see it intentionally, and your aunt also didn´t want us to see it anything, in fact now I believe that more than Ye Hua jumping in fright, was your aunt who pushed him, because in a second she was dressed, or at list wrapped in her clothes” seeing that she wasn´t appeased by his words he decided no to say more about “Ye Hua was less worried for his lack of cloths and his attitude instead of showing repentance, turned into one of defiance, he was defending his mate from possible competitors”
          
          “Competitors?” she asked confused “Mate?” her shocking eyes showing the understanding of the last word. 
          
          “Yes my love, mate, Ye Hua and Bai Qian share the same bond as we did, and your uncles Bai Zhe and Zhe Yan are the same as us, even your grandparents, the only ones that seems that didn’t share anything are your parents” he revealed “The mating bond as I just recently learn is one of the things more unusual in the world, and as can bring you happiness also can bring calamity”

Extract two: 
          Half sorry for not knowing how to close her mouth, Ming Yun muttered "Mo Yuan"
          "My brother “she exclaimed in panic "You are my sister-in-law"
          To which Ming Yun open-mouthed exclaimed "Did he tell you about me?"
          “Of course, yes" she exclaimed offended "He's my brother, why he wouldn't tell me about you? What he never explained is why you two aren't together" she said, accompanying her words with an inquisitive look, which was blatantly ignored by Ming Yun "And for what I see you are not going to be very communicative about it either" she comments sarcastically. 
          
          Extract three: 
          “Did you loved them” he asked 
          “Who” she questioned not sure about who he was speaking 
          “The twins of course, Who did you think I was talking about?” 
          Still unsecure she answered “As I was talking about my family, I thought you were asking for them” 
          “Ohh” he said as he evaluated her 
          “What you mean with ¡Oh!” she protested 
          Noticing her irritated question, he explained himself “Xiao Bai, from Mo Yuan and Zhe Yan I know most of the story behind your father behaviour with you, and the part that your uncles and aunt played in all this insane situation, and despite the fact that I consider to Bai Zhi as one of my dearest brothers, I am not blind about the part that your grandpa played as well” 
          Baffled she stared at him as she was hurrying him to continue “Do you really believe that your grandfather was unaware of the situation between your father and you?” he inquired, but seeing the disbelief in the expression of Feng Jiu he said further “As much as you uncles and aunt were the ones that handle most of the situations among you too, a wise king always knows what happen under his domains, when your uncles take you out from the house of your father was without the approval of Bai Zhi, Mo Yuan told me how hard all of them try to persuade him about the bad behaviour of Bai Yi, but Bai Zhi was blind, and that broke them”

I've been working on the new chapter for two weeks, and this weekend I dedicated hours to it but I'm not done yet, at the moment I have about 18 sheets of  just memories, and I think there are still two more sheets to go to finish them, I really don't expect it to be this long, but one thing led to another and now I have this mountain that I have to finish because is really important to the story. I am going to split these memories into 3 or 4 parts and distribute them in the following chapters, otherwise I would end up with a chapter Incredibly long, tomorrow I hope to finish the memories and start with the chapter itself, for now I'll leave you with some previews of the memories. Hope you liked: 
          
          Extract one: 
          “Why did you like it this place, Xiao Hong?” 
          
          The voice of her shifu brings her back from her thoughts “Because it shows the true nature of the people” 
          
          “Explain”
          
          With a stern voice she said “We are dark, we are light, we are bad, and we are good” while she was speaking, she started to walk to the border until half of her body were in the dark side “each of us has the same capacity to bring good or bad into this world, is our own decision that path that we take”
          
          A proud smile filled the face of Ming Yun “Well said my child, truly well said” she praised her “Only the true mate of the master of the universe can speak like this”
          
          The blushed facer of Xiao Jiu was her only answer, but as Ming Yun knows shame was never an obstacle for her student when she wants to know something “Shifu, did you accept me as your student because of him?”

I was checking the documents where I have write this story, and I discover that i have to make some changes to the index of the story, because the original one does not match well now, and after make all that, the story ends with more chapters that I planed in the beginning, now is like 45 to 50 chapters, would you like to see what comes before long: 
          
          21.	Time to war, Bai Yi is not ready to surrender
          22.	Cang Yi, Zhi Heng set a trap, can Feng Jiu survive?
          23.	She succeeds, but Dong Hua fell, Miao Luo won? 
          24.	She saves her love, Miao Luo retreat
          25.	Time for the second trial, will she go with him? 
          26.	The trial begins, we are now in the old republic of China
          
          32.	The true king awake, where is her queen? 
          33.	Time to kill the rats, trust in gugu she will exterminate those animals
          34.	The demon lord against the twins, oh no you make upset to Ming Yue “Anybody can harm my mate” 
          35.	Where is Ba Yi and Cang Yi? 
          36.	They kidnaped the mother of Feng Jiu, Bai Zhu is dying (白主)
          37.	We fight together, first your mother, then Miao Luo 
          
          Does it sound interesting? 
          See you soon