diamondations

Hi! I hope you’re doing well. I was wondering if you could give a shot at my story called The Courage Of Stars. It’d mean a lot.
          
          You can find it here: https://my.w.tt/ShtzJqldK9
          
          Have a wonderful day!
          

CarvenRidge

So all in all, you like it? 

CarvenRidge

Thanks. Sorry about the other stuff. I read over it twice and stuff but it's good to have a good eye. Maybe I read to fast. 
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brit235

@CarvenRidge Absolutely! Sure you still have a few problems with grammar, a few misspellings, and words in places they don't quite belong. But, it's one of the top overall stories I've read... or series rather. It's really quite good.
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