During the writing of the fourth chapter of "Inherited" I realised that in my excitement to write the third chapter (The Next Day), I really lost my character, which is really disappointing. So, in the next few days I am planning to rewrite that chapter in the hopes that I can create a more consistent character. I'm not sure if anyone reads these, but I just wanted to type out what I was doing more for my own benefit (I really struggle with editing so I need to push myself to do it properly) Thanks for reading :-)