brookStarA

HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!! I hope everyone has a wonderful spooky night! 

Raycat1314

Hey not to be rude but when are you going to make that story #texttospeech

brookStarA

Hello, I'm very sorry for being late to answer. I've been trying to make the story texttospeech for a while now, but it hasn't been working so well. So it might take longer for me to add it in. 
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brookStarA

Which book do y'all want me to remake, since I looked back at them and realized how cringe they are : (

Mochachan1234

@brookStarA do you know something like geges still continuing jjk with a new series called jjk Shippuden it's honestly do corny 
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Mochachan1234

Hello brookstarA I wanted to say thank you for the tips but ima bit confused on how to create some coincidences like can you give some examples also I plan on making the yandere guy like kind of take advantage of her and the main cause of him being a yandeevis like his traumatic past so he doesn't want to lose her and will always be there like kinda clingy unusually and say it's that because of his trauma and confuse her into thinking that he's just like you know all traumatic and his past experiences that's why also I plan on making the yandere development slow like at first he'll be a stalker yandee then his obsession will grow more and will turn like into a more dangerous yandere type is this idea good cause I also plan on making him kill some certain people close to her life ..

Mochachan1234

Hello brookstarA actually I just wanted to get some tips from you cause you wrote really good yandere stories and well ...I'm writing a yandere fanfic where the guy is brooding and cold Stoic well he has lost his dead ex girlfriend and now he's fallen in love with like a shy and dumb girl i don't want to make it the traditional yandere story where he'll end up kidnapping her but like he's the mix of every yandere type mainly the manipulative i really need some  ideas  cause I also want to blend some psychological horror and gore with it can you please help..
          

Mochachan1234

@Mochachan1234 hello sorry for noticing actually yea even I wanted to add psychological horror in it but I kinda didn't know how to thank you so much I needed this exactly 
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brookStarA

Hello, my apologies for being late to answer. But, I would love to help you with some tips, if you don't mind. Manipulation over Force – Instead of kidnapping, have him twist her world so she chooses to stay (guilt trips, fake danger, isolating her). Psychological Horror – Show his control subtly (gaslighting, making her doubt reality, planting “coincidences”). Hope these tips help a bit, if you need anymore, just message me. ՞⁔•͈ ·̫ •͈⁔՞
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