@Brook01234 Thank you so much! That means a lot to me :)
I looked at your story and it's really good so far! One thing I'd recommend would be to have Rose and Jasmine interact in the first chapter, seeing as their friendship-gone-wrong will inevitably be what keeps the reader hooked (and you want to get them hooked by then, since most readers tend to judge a book by the first chapter). Maybe put a break at the end of the current first chapter and transition to Rose's point of view.
One other thing you could try if you find yourself losing interest in your story (I don't know if it's normal or not, but it happens to me all the time) is to brainstorm: just make completely random lists of everything that you could possibly do with the story! More times than not I've come across something that gets me excited again, and once I'm immersed in the story I find I can't stop writing it.
You seem to have a really good understanding of your characters and their stories though, and that kind of focus is what really keeps the story interesting, so you've already got that! I hope this was a little bit helpful, best of luck, and I can't wait to see what happens with Rose and Jasmine next!
