I updated the Prologue, and its WAY better now. I also updated the book description to make it a little more fitting, adding Saffra in since the book starts with her, its only fair ;) Don't worry about rushing to get to it, just when ever you have a chance, I know you are busy with the map anyway. But I think you'll like the prologue a lot more. It reminds me of the way the LOTR movies are introduced (not the books they start differently). But I like how in the LOTR movie they give back story, that's what I tried to do too!! <3 Thanks Erin!