brownielixlove
DID YALL SEE "STAY in Our Little House" FANMEETING ??? IM NOT OKAY
brownielixlove
brownielixlove
hey ! i kinda need your thoughts.
someone irl told me my story is “problematic”, especially because of the smut scene (chap 9) and even said something like “your gay stuff is problematic”… and now i’m just sitting here wondering if i should change that scene, rewrite parts of the story, or just leave it as it is. i didn’t write it with any bad intention but now i’m overthinking everything.
so i’d really appreciate your honest opinion. do you think there’s something wrong with it? should i change anything?
i feel a bit lost about it right now :(
opolspy
@brownielixlove I dont get how is problematic, like it has the perfect flow and it meant not harm so it should harm anyone!
staymoatiny858
@brownielixlove WHAT??!!no its its not problematic,if anything its the most perfect story with perfect storyline and perfect sequence flow(or whatever that's called) and plz don't overthink about this just because of someone's words to you dont let them discourage you ,if they find it problematic then they can skip on reading it or if they're that confident they can write their own ff instead of throwing consults at others works and bet it wouldn't be half as good as yours and no you dont have to change any thing its perfect as it is and I find the flow is so good to follow too but believe me overthinking isn't good at all I'm speaking from experience
brownielixlove
CHAPTER 9 IS OUT LOVESSSS !!
staymoatiny858
@brownielixlove yaaaay gonna read it now its the perfect start for me here after my break I just hope engenes will be able to bring heeseung back and the situation with zb1 is hopeless so I gave up but stanning p1harmony recently cheered me up I didnt know they are this good did you hear "unique"they are so talented
brownielixlove
IM GONNA SPAM POST IN A FEW HOURS !!
brownielixlove
gonna post later, im in a bad mood with heeseung and zb1's situations </33
staymoatiny858
Hi sorry im late but I didn't open wattpad since a while and ofcourse because I'm not here my favorite author posted not one but two chapters of my current fav ff
Thank you anyways I love and hope you're doing well also it was my birthday a week ago but it got delayed due to circumstances and I didn't get my surprise until 2days ago my little sister made a cute little origami flower and I absolutelylove it I like flowers the most and she knows it
brownielixlove
@ staymoatiny858 YOURE ADORABLE !! HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY !! HOPE YOU HAD LOTS OF FUN <33
brownielixlove
CHAPTER 8 IS OUT (posting a lot to make up for the long delay)
brownielixlove
**SPOIL CHAPTER 7**
i hope you don't mind if i added a sister to minho even if irl he is an only child haha
staymoatiny858
@brownielixlove first its a ff so it isnt even real second its Your story you can do anythingyou want with it and finally I like siblings stories and his sister's story in this is so cute and heartbreaking I love it and I hope they will reunite at some point
brownielixlove
GUESS WHOS BACKKKK ? (chap 7 is out :P)
brownielixlove
maybe starting to work on a season 2 of act like you love me
staymoatiny858
@brownielixlove oooh I would like that but plz don't give up on sworn to you coz I'm already too attached Good luck either way Fighting!!!