iheartleii
hii, i noticed you read all my chapters and you’ve actually kept up to date and i’m so supportive of you♥️ i just wanted to ask you for a review and what your critiques are and are there any favorite chapter of yours?
bruhwhattheflip
heyyyy! yes, ur writing is good and im enjoying the book. for critiques—i would say better flow in the chapters, longer chapters for some, and better clarity on who’s speaking, although i can tell but i can see how it could be confusing for others. overall, you’re doing good, especially with portraying the emotions with the two most recent chapters