brunetterains

IMPORTANT: 
          	ok so I didn't upload for like 2 months, but my excuse is that I had super bad writers block! 
          	
          	anyways, sad news, I'm taking down "when stars align".
          	but good news, I'll be replacing it with a book that's almost the exact same, just more organized and planned out. I wasn't really feeling "when stars align" and it was super confusing so hopefully the next book will be 10x better.
          	
          	but I really need help w/ the names! I want the mc's nickname to be Mars, but should her full name be Mardyn or Mare? help please

desii_dior

@brunetterains Mariah ?? Maybe and please update it soon bestie I’m dying here❤️
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brunetterains

IMPORTANT: 
          ok so I didn't upload for like 2 months, but my excuse is that I had super bad writers block! 
          
          anyways, sad news, I'm taking down "when stars align".
          but good news, I'll be replacing it with a book that's almost the exact same, just more organized and planned out. I wasn't really feeling "when stars align" and it was super confusing so hopefully the next book will be 10x better.
          
          but I really need help w/ the names! I want the mc's nickname to be Mars, but should her full name be Mardyn or Mare? help please

desii_dior

@brunetterains Mariah ?? Maybe and please update it soon bestie I’m dying here❤️
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brunetterains

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omg I’m reading Ice by engelix and I thought it was a cute wholesome love story so I’m on chapter 20 or whatever I decide to go to the authors account and there is. ANOTHER FUCKING STORY WHERE THEY ARE BROKEN UP??? Like I’m LITERALLY BALLING MY EYES OUT AT 12:35 LIKE WTH HAPPENED TO FINN AND AVES??

brunetterains

chapter 4 sneak peek :) 
          “I give her a lazy smile and lean against her, “I like the burn, baby.” I wiggle my eyebrows at her, and she sighs. “Mi piace l'ustione, piccola”
          
          “And now we’ve reached drunk flirty Italian Tatum.” Chanelle sighs and crosses her arms while Baylor instantly perks up and points finger guns at me.
          
          “Hell yes, I love drunk Tatum!” Baylor and I are usually drinking buddies, and while she’s a happy drunk I’m more of a flirty drunk—we balance each other out perfectly.”
          
          ps idk why this chapter is taking a month to write, expect it on thursday or friday

-Jreadss-

this sounds so good!!
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brunetterains

ew I have like zero motivation to write the filler chapters and it's taken forever to write chapter 4, but I moved all the character aesthetics to a different chapter, changed the chapter titles, and changes Tatum's major. I'm still a little iffy on whether I should keep her major as a architect or change it to investigative journalism because I feel like she would definitely have a thrilling job and not something like an architect? ahhh idk...

stunningtothecore

@brunetterains  you're welcome love <33 and i love you too:)
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brunetterains

@stunningtothecore stop I literally love you so much <3 thanks bestie cause this just gave me so much motivation:))
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stunningtothecore

@brunetterains  hey- i've read literally two chapters but your writing is amazing an the story is great, so don't give up <3 
            
            reminder: you should write for your own self more than anyone else. please don't feel pressured to write for your readers, write at your own pace. good things take time, and if you're a perfectionist/want to make every chapter great, take your time, please
            
            ily, do not give up, and work at your own pace! whatever your comfortable with!! it's not necessary to make the chapters very long
            
            p.s. by all means change her major to investigate journalism, i agree with you, she would have an exciting profession 
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